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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,TlHd(X{/|"m b
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,
qN$x;kBb#Z.i;W 結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:!ehAz,{ C)C6D
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biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....G C |#To W
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:
1X,g^e9{k!e+T.M 好抵死....c4lUY(M'o4C/k
移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]
KcA [5AX U\ 移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...k(YWP*WyV5E){7\9Le
個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM: O(p'`YtXJ

(kz;M,Zt&G$o 移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
R Z V!S,Xg|*[!a| 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]
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個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D
;G/k)uk m9CU4cu 好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(D1mv~8{I&X
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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素
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1YGx/^$L8oF{ } !! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xpC? `Nj
佢講野好有point..
;K(r!oV+e7x 而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁jcC_#QO DQ3]
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甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!
2{p`*M1t@`I?0k 假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:8I%t8p2sT4u)C#AZ ~
我比較支持篤篤xpG/I QT!p
佢講野好有point..... [/quote]cQwI[j'}0U$\b
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甲狀腺正d:lol:mOy[9w7z6Z ~6x
支持你向呢方面發展^(aR)I6~
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:
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^N jnI3FT 甲狀腺正d:lol:c*}"gXd xq
支持你向呢方面發展%X4gul'SS
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]
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甲狀腺  釘橋你為我地EF帶黎無窮無盡既歡笑.VK d+Z0MJo3n
希望你計族KEEP住呢個偉大既精神.fM'QeW
笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!
,xy0Zf JF`*l k3a%M 支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持
p|\R:O&K s_ 我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂
9d [S[,j9d9}n0k 我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦7H7E!s$ihK`
當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
'D\)HB,t+u;DHV 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:XJ)H3r)qQE l4Aq[
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]}6u.} W+j4M,KU3K
...你果單..太小兒科...U Dmr/E;C#`k
其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...
n}%v%S4F:d 就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...[3f%j5E*v
好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...&@g`8Yhy`GX
石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...
F%Wfd V'^a]$f 由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
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;yo_-dp;\`H7M 有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:
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本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:rE| o N ]

4h!y4U%HG*m6^vz@&| ...你果單..太小兒科...mk P[ ?Z
其實呢你... [/quote]
7ff+Ks8h6C;t not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?
#e,V#~ o-D;n0|O this method very good wor.
x(t1?(\ ^6K} and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:4vo4vo\6Z4} ?y

-v:c}8DU$j4{ T$L not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?2f d+F/q z+C)BI
this method very good wor.sX9s q;i
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote])q!m,B#zJx8e
oh, 太可借了, 我唔係想令人發笑的...
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你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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