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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,
k.^!e@[0? 所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,4L| |cx'`#w7T
結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
%i"F]#D ?7r-?;w$W 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
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Wkl%h$w6O!h 唔錯唔錯~你的筆法可以出書~應該可以成為世界10大暢銷書之一

biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....Ex&sJ9g3_2{r*J9?
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:sG {h@1tQW
好抵死....
vtZ$H \ x&nc 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote] D}3G}L#M
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...*~Z7P iyI%e1b9A/QF
個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:,zW FIC/o
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移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
(VMt(N5W$v`1J {6J~ 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]t#EX|.}%\@Y
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個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:DG5v;}*c([;l.Hmi
好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(
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我呢個故仔仲勁: 中國山區有個女仔出世後個patpat不斷咁脹大,而家個patpat大到閰王都話死左唔收佢

xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素
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!! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp9XU:[6K6M
佢講野好有point..
5P4~p7`%xQp&K 而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁
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甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!
H_ xv*] 假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:X[(J%Z%v!{mNt
我比較支持篤篤xp? |N8h Z3E[
佢講野好有point..... [/quote]6bi.fp*_1eBK xK
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甲狀腺正d:lol:1Q8DP6mFfR:g
支持你向呢方面發展c)o7A!oV?
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM: v'h'O G(GuCN e

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甲狀腺正d:lol:} B{"OWQ.PG
支持你向呢方面發展
D(\$]:s e 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]
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甲狀腺  釘橋你為我地EF帶黎無窮無盡既歡笑.
+a/A6@*yR xo5I%p z 希望你計族KEEP住呢個偉大既精神.
F#QK:I M"E(E.\ 笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!(k TbD Z$|
支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

下?
H1S)b!q&iQ#{ @ 搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持a2_4[Yp!s8n
我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂?,cS,~1a)yp;t
我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦I;bkSpL-vb*o
當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
?6C7o{2['J:NSt 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:6aZ;a;bC:B+m+e
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]%S? J8E[
...你果單..太小兒科...
m0Ur;U z[&L 其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...
@-xG*~_d |(a/`-i 就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...
D&Z-|)W J!BQ#| 好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...
+va/wIt 石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...
*` n)O,_S|0m&sX 由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
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M6cBhzs SvD/{,|+c 有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:z'[WL z4O

/k!\o:zn [[i] Last edited by JCer on 2005-6-12 at 02:03 AM [/i]]

本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:
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...你果單..太小兒科...
quI1Q7W P6q \.r,eH 其實呢你... [/quote]
2n o,E8b~ rcm1t` not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?L;?t#m(tcy
this method very good wor.{Eqh{g`Q3c
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:
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not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?
"Hk)eh6u6P this method very good wor.
5e&V+r%f8?(] f,[ and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]p%h0n`l1D3E:mD
oh, 太可借了, 我唔係想令人發笑的...!Az7N8n(i4r$WBx
你點可以當係笑話咁睇呢件事? ohoh 可惜 P9{1NQif

k4]G7Oq t0Y'R 你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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