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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,_m!^~v2?8l
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,
$Z-L7Dl y` 結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:r8W W#tps5P0z _D
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
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biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....W;H~|2rq-\
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:
c)l-L0}!j 好抵死....$p6k;b$txAvu
移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]
,Y\:dvx1] 移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
sMX1J.bj:s 個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:^9{?K'k+A[Hq

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L`C'T#dM0G(B 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]m+_y+p+eZA

r i.i)HHoHha-NS 個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D2N0m!K|3S J*n}O
好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(
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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素
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karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xpPpF[D%c3R4O
佢講野好有point..
S:^Cq1| Xt!\] 而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁{a ~ X,Gy
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甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!)TtBM?0R_2RY*J
假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:
8e1duRWa3c 我比較支持篤篤xp4i/E@r%w]6w
佢講野好有point..... [/quote]
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3W8QBn:U 甲狀腺正d:lol:6s6@YtN&e [N+n'i
支持你向呢方面發展
qRg1x nK 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:Fob O5GZ%c,H~5C,H

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甲狀腺正d:lol:
?e9Ro3X8[(v] 支持你向呢方面發展_r*Ix{z6Z"EEn
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]@?M*S#h+q%JS-_^

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笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!-YGieca1o+~[
支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持
6N({Am/K 我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂
#["_%{%SQ {+U 我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦-h t'g9q3d2?5J
當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
wb7R_ MR!w 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:5z(X rf'W'?M dW'P
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]7@1M%|#uP+R5Gr-i8o9C
...你果單..太小兒科...
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就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...
x,UaO4kM n5q 好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...
*t Zw#z.q X 石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...U6FVwS sk
由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...hoh5Y7B3SG
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有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:6g*l~!T { R-` cZ h(D
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[[i] Last edited by JCer on 2005-6-12 at 02:03 AM [/i]]

本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:
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not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?
ZmLi$O^"k this method very good wor.8~ G'u+FS+T_
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:3|ci#],|Td'K

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and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]!C{$L4x^)b t
oh, 太可借了, 我唔係想令人發笑的... i0}p/cH%R]3D;v
你點可以當係笑話咁睇呢件事? ohoh 可惜
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你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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