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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ R. z8 {: T- y5 h
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 F" F8 P* X6 L# P4 |% `% r- reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , x' \' {4 U: D1 i7 {, `& G- V _) C& D+ y& V+ `- Q
Let me just rewrite yours:) q# }) B4 E. p1 R. E6 E
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, `6 M+ i- X8 ^% c3 G& i$ M/ B
2 j7 K+ l' q, w( p0 A! p# A( R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 g( E2 c2 N! g b: ~
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 k; w0 |- u+ `$ x, p. oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. D) S' m8 J8 H" Y2 k
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