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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* R+ ]* q6 o! @% U% r: Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% j, D& }* B2 h& q- c$ P. s3 keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( a0 k; d$ h1 C
+ w" }" _' T2 ^* Q- {Let me just rewrite yours:
( z) P1 Q; U8 V V& N5 n# aIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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9 b. a6 T, J) d' z( ?& r3 s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: i/ |9 _8 Q3 i
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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9 {! _& T0 R# ` U0 r3 U- J+ NThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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