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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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: O& d/ l) E' G( j3 F" Xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 }4 f3 E% [9 {* _& C& N0 veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 d; m8 R3 u% i0 p3 L
0 ~% N7 }1 @* k0 @' m+ U% x! ELet me just rewrite yours:$ q2 z7 p3 ~" I* D$ t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 C7 Z# I" \1 n% r/ s
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. n) ^: }, T& q. R( T! a1 B4 {* W2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! f" Z- O; k% X/ W
! A+ J8 l6 f) A4 {; [- D, LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% s+ g/ c( a& R( j/ M6 Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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