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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 w7 [4 @: _" d, F0 s) E9 ^
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; F4 F3 ]4 O! ?7 @
# g1 n, ~3 w' [/ kLet me just rewrite yours:
) \$ t- b2 A/ wIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( u% x( I; h. l* [4 ?: u0 b5 h- C
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& w q' I |: I2 C3 g6 h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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& a6 k8 \: i& W9 @2 w/ w' T5 ?There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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