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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 J8 G$ G, b6 f; O0 N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 J w+ J0 o% D5 O" A/ k! L! S( P; K P; y6 M2 G; d
Let me just rewrite yours:8 G q9 [. A; c% N- z! ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 G$ S2 x* j$ U2 X7 N
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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8 x% L' k+ V r2 kThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! v ^9 {5 ^# n
5 A+ r& W) J5 e jThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. L8 x5 [* r6 H! w- x
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