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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 ]! d; A; {% R5 c' ]3 p
8 Y; ?% H* B8 y! X, r8 F5 s! j! jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : K+ S5 \+ f3 Y% o& g- B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & ]5 }: M9 G" D/ m$ h! g! w( P) i2 I1 m- K# G
Let me just rewrite yours:3 ~1 Q+ r1 G5 x! f. t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
\9 E1 o& V( U1 \7 J& g2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 ?0 n9 X! k4 N0 |7 O. d
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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9 i! ]' K6 E# ^* G5 h1 AGretz. |
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