wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦' ^3 Y" n2 E2 F9 t, t5 G( P' T4 Z9 ?
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

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你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:
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呢度有

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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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[ Last edited by roykenroy on 2005-7-22 at 05:36 PM ]

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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原著係呢度

) i4 U# n7 A, m- U; p# i: y4 ye排唔見你既~  W3 |  P% f  q% x* N0 f; }! S: l
你做緊咩??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~: x5 U" F  ]) P
你做緊咩??

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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:3 h5 g! c! E. G/ w" v

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差唔多啦，我對呢方面好廢=.=, v0 x- e6 i4 v& e1 f
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