wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

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我果度冇咗大結局~~
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wanmankit

http://big.cmfu.com:9080/www.cmfu.com/readbook.asp?bl_id=2877
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:# ~8 a+ v; ^! K# R# }
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呢度有

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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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我又閃.......
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又話等我番黎既...............

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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原著係呢度

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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:5 T( G- C# }' s) g0 m. W4 r2 I$ l
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e排唔見你既~0 c% L7 W8 l* u
你做緊咩??

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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^: |# X* ~3 |, _& s* \5 P/ e; [' t, }

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:
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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^6 u: Y& E/ n" l4 e
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:. y: Y3 ?1 [  E

1 x2 _, F& k3 c8 K/ T睇下你想描寫咩人???8 R9 U" }( q2 |3 q& {
好似戰魂咁??

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差唔多啦，我對呢方面好廢=.=
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