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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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" V* n, X! u- H2 A" Z& p# C jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' _& Q/ }( d. m
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : i7 X# H+ c- Z9 g i. G/ s; i3 X. D9 R8 H' ?( A
Let me just rewrite yours:0 B1 S% u' M* H% F2 H% W6 S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 y1 e- Q1 B4 `3 w& |# O2 x2 m2 M
2 P1 K& \* i/ F9 D1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 C1 b- ?$ X, ?: L6 w8 J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* m5 Y& G4 W* S6 Z( q5 {, \; n
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 X9 L1 l8 k+ r2 Z. Q
! D, r, [, o3 f3 j/ n9 pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% K8 m l; I1 Y$ f3 {- |0 h
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