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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ o6 N1 Y& ?& f1 o
$ l3 k: y* J/ F0 p/ pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , T; C4 e3 {3 N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . `, Q/ z9 E l+ P2 D
1 d; ^( S7 f: k) v: M& F# [Let me just rewrite yours:3 \) D% t* { u8 P3 W
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 b2 h. w- p: h2 M
2 o+ Q9 E6 y3 A* I6 ~) B& |9 ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# C9 w; C s, Z$ M1 F% N; Q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' O3 o" g2 d; }# D, W* |
% w7 A9 o9 m f$ H( cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ I& b) J8 o7 z6 V
% t" S$ V$ b) G" K, M# R! lThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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