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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& }/ H. |& s( j/ E# G: z% e
# H: Y! s3 x, O: p% Lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- y/ @: m/ u7 y0 @) I! Ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 F, V7 Q' q/ L" F; X
- L c9 _7 `3 a, ? s+ uLet me just rewrite yours:) ~# Q3 Z2 z0 x- e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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. m3 W0 ^/ V6 [1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. Y( J8 W8 F- h' B, b4 W6 I
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 ~) y8 g: x( S& G$ b+ p5 v! j
, W% M6 }# M( i& w% U- sThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ |1 [0 h3 O: C) l/ X
. q: Y9 D2 U4 |! o) yThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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