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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 `0 E( o3 l, Y; G0 p9 ~it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 z$ {' c$ S( n4 l9 `5 A/ l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & a z0 G7 _6 d/ }+ p) \3 {* s
8 [, H, H/ u/ z) \, i% P1 f7 c) ?Let me just rewrite yours:- h) G# z4 @1 S" |1 q% N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 P5 _1 s; ?" o$ L& J# h" s5 D9 @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 O9 O1 P* r% j! I5 q( A' U
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