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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 @# y1 w" l, M+ y; X
* o3 X& m9 m7 k% R+ lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 w5 r4 H6 c. `! C' Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / q& Q( k, W5 J7 Z3 }0 W; v& Z; c
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Let me just rewrite yours:* ] l0 K: P% ]/ m5 X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( e: ]; P. u" H5 P% p1 j) e
+ [( K# c; B1 f0 ?* s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 C: X0 {; G- D) K3 I2 p4 O
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., Q2 K4 d. L R# n- C6 z, b8 \
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 C5 w; _) A5 \$ N6 L
9 _; q( j$ X4 E/ e8 oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 ?) \; v( F; [% ]6 ^8 ?
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