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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* r2 }% R$ y0 _1 y9 j9 B+ E$ Q
* t/ i$ ?, O, I9 C# Sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' g& S- S/ g* K/ N i, D" t
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # |3 F0 U9 _' ~% N: x& a+ n
0 c' I( g# M( X; ~ d) |Let me just rewrite yours:; x7 Q5 P6 a$ H, Q4 R( T, t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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' N! ^8 _+ G* z c3 U. w: P! Z# v; m1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( ?5 b7 G" o2 ~! Q" Z: S/ l4 \- [
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 l2 @) Z0 @" C, N8 j" v
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 V" u6 l& b8 i) P( \$ W [
* \" L' T& Y1 Q, VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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