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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 D% V5 W9 ^; J2 F: G) O' V( [everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 _+ z9 A4 T5 N7 n" }1 E% M+ s' L
5 O5 ]" J5 C- {8 H. f' {Let me just rewrite yours:- z. O$ T1 d: a7 D1 E# m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 @. I, U0 K! b$ g% X* l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." `1 ]; D+ n9 {, g$ o
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' Y! y6 p+ @2 B6 @2 @/ MThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ E: d" V4 A. g3 X' A. {
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