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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 d5 W/ m% j/ n3 l
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( i9 t' F5 D6 \: g. ^. u0 A/ `everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - b3 m$ T4 R e
; M# I' D: ~4 Y, s5 v6 hLet me just rewrite yours:
! A- u! Y y+ ~It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, Y8 w; c2 E, A6 d
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! L/ B* t" w, @" u3 s$ s7 Y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) C& o1 J+ R5 y( a2 w f5 n2 h
& O- W5 T$ Q9 `# }" L( Z+ KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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