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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- {( |( A1 D7 u: V/ u6 A& r
$ t# y! C" _* O9 @9 o4 Dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * n8 g' U, [3 B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 V3 t' ?8 l% P" k% M1 ?
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Let me just rewrite yours:# I/ {- p9 o; J7 G9 ?2 n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- U" H: R# v0 u$ ?' T6 M: Y
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ v) k9 U' [( }, o( ~$ |
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ z: k+ l, m, ?6 E
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 I; G& U* n/ h
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