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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- z# t3 l9 n& d2 z
, r; {, ^; {# L' k( m1 P4 D3 g# Wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% M. m/ c F+ Q6 G- teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # J C2 w0 z5 \- ~8 T/ P. n
# a+ J/ `4 R4 Q/ S3 S. U/ OLet me just rewrite yours:9 Y7 u6 m# I. E+ Q/ R) a1 B. e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* N" m$ d3 {, Q) @1 ~0 R" [1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 b1 U3 t5 Z7 G( W: z6 f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 B8 j4 m# S: m) C2 ]6 j
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* h. t8 x+ s# k4 D
n$ B1 J' |8 ^8 i- E8 g4 l! _; YThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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