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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- [ h a' y3 I" O: G0 feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ P. q( ^2 H6 i' ~" ?$ ?
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Let me just rewrite yours: T3 c) t6 N: a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ [! d3 P% F, ~6 i; V9 e
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!% [1 G) f s% R. V: y& y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; a- I) M$ I$ wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 T2 q! p" Y: x$ t6 ]; E
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