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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; Q& C( e( _( M5 ^8 y+ M
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* z! u# U, }4 M+ t" Z Z3 u$ peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 U) }, }& |2 \' ~$ u, w: r. z! U3 s# v5 _! P: q
Let me just rewrite yours:1 a6 t* q* A6 ~2 |' p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- F+ Y Z# k2 N3 ^/ [ c/ O4 J! k9 r2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 K( ~; D. o7 m7 _5 C S6 a' e
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. d3 Z* r/ d, D+ E8 R) Y. j- i7 m! X
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. V( H8 e) |; f$ J
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