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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 Z2 g* a& |6 @
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. R& h2 Y, w0 n5 q! W3 f$ n
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Let me just rewrite yours:, P9 k5 r! p& b4 [5 Y, e3 }
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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- B: l/ Q' M1 v/ W% x9 h: r& d1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 N- D' G- j1 X8 _
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; W% l9 T0 C* G2 y8 [) bThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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$ K9 y* M/ p$ m* I6 r6 `' pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 I9 f& ]- s$ E* t, B
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