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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 t+ j% ?. E" n: R" p8 N, G6 aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : w8 @) e4 f9 I6 [( e# ]. X
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Let me just rewrite yours:- P2 y" Y' f, _& J
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- p) k' L& t7 O+ T* A& ^+ r7 h
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" u4 V8 A6 I( b, y! T1 w
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) s" O8 }5 \) H# k2 X/ ~3 A$ L: i
2 D5 H$ H$ O0 GThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. E d6 e* B( f
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