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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 W$ E7 D0 A$ k6 K3 ]1 k
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ b5 Y1 W! m, b/ ] F, W9 o& @0 c
Let me just rewrite yours:
, z, r; F, c! j6 W! \9 }5 x5 ^3 c: GIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
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+ H8 m9 m6 C9 ]6 n2 bThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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