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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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; Y9 b- a* _2 [; Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; \: D; q2 P$ |' F b1 v
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) W# ~" f) ?0 J+ v+ Z
( B4 A# y }( p/ n; J" z) kLet me just rewrite yours:& S" @4 y7 f2 _# c2 v1 |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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+ O. G% J- Q$ o2 H6 V, o% _/ }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 u w# N: t$ a! u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, |8 Y9 i2 z* _! |/ X: r, F. f; \' HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! z# c4 i0 B& M( s
4 Z1 [8 }6 S, M) |Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 C! o4 r$ H2 O# H; ?2 A
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