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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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+ |+ q% D3 P! B0 H- Cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : y' b9 W7 L6 G( I! |# j% N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / Q- I) I* u2 N/ \
; V: `8 c: d4 F' ?Let me just rewrite yours:( ]0 h, @3 B+ T; v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; c! ]9 l2 y- f- E* e
: E1 d$ J6 l- k- N Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- {8 }* o! j" V% e ~* M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, @3 z( m( \( L/ v, O- N2 U! c+ HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, p$ k1 r8 y( b: G. u2 ^Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. V2 r G0 I* R) I* ]" F
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