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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 ]& D- ?) T/ i" l' N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # k, p9 A- a( y7 r/ X3 Y
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( ?' ]8 p$ m5 ~! b, z# L
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 D1 p- r$ V4 k T
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: |3 N4 X7 d! ^+ K6 q+ ?: h
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 m- L9 O! J' Y$ ]3 E+ a
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