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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- w) \2 q+ g4 J: l: x; ~
, _7 H5 {% f6 M7 V# oit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) s4 N3 B% T5 ]2 i; ]1 l2 v
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 Q% Q% F/ q" T& a) `% w+ \
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Let me just rewrite yours:& S/ D$ m, T/ S' _ r6 T0 j
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me ]- L4 f ?/ O( @! d+ X( ^
: V, U$ E4 y, u5 _: f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! J0 |; C. g F1 y) i# U3 {1 L
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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. B8 q0 F& S( d, T/ dThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- ~) _. R* t6 h; {! |
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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