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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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9 N1 O& T2 s* d% @4 }" z- H% y5 G7 kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, }8 z. ^% J8 T3 q Q3 Ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 E6 o6 G. K" B9 C, R! L f/ H5 n+ a
' v! N/ C8 C# G- x+ wLet me just rewrite yours:
7 ?% t: {9 ]) k$ g6 s0 W1 {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: K) Q; {$ s7 a7 ?! k4 n" L
9 s; ^' D! b8 i) N I. P9 ^* t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* y Z2 l5 P* ~5 m5 [- p# \
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% k- F# B+ a5 q& l
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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