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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! G3 @+ C( D t6 l: `( l
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & ^3 h& V6 K/ Y5 ?% D/ m7 e
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. U9 ]! c8 i7 ^, F, ]; ^% H( J" m+ {% C4 U4 _
Let me just rewrite yours:
, e; ^' k% ^; K3 `It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- T. \; d m `' k+ a
; v+ L& i) _8 O; M. w1 w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 P; `( c _9 }7 j" V5 H0 v$ K2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 s4 D6 X' J m& F
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 F& m$ X4 a" q8 S8 q% G
, K6 l& n5 s, ?, |) p8 I9 {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." ?) z. \8 e u; v- \: A
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