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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, C& d( X" N% b4 z# X( X, J4 r3 Jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 _, J( T& X9 O0 i7 T; @
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - P6 d# W' h% F0 a
: b2 u' n/ w$ s `Let me just rewrite yours:: N" b& ?% t6 t5 D* w0 n$ c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 z: I0 J# s7 T! K# U( F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( T+ G" \7 d4 d3 O; @# h& f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. G9 J1 ?; g: |% eThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( ~- m- b$ |6 `& B3 o- u# P# e
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