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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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! J5 x; }! s" ?+ Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ S% b+ z. ~5 Deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 X! D# ~8 M7 X6 q% G& U$ U
5 v- ^0 C1 Y6 F; P; rLet me just rewrite yours:: P, m& ]) w7 S1 N- z$ I% ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 T3 d4 M) ?+ t; {3 K% g) Y# g: C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 T- Q, U' X" i$ Z4 `& V+ s/ Q$ [2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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0 \5 y. r- P+ k8 ^There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* Q% K1 W; p1 J1 ^4 \9 @$ R2 Y0 Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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