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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- h0 X3 C, M* v, C9 J
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 H. F" @& r0 }$ l% L* W; C5 e
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 T5 h2 E: S9 p6 H
$ j7 s+ w9 n) @& ^8 w0 QLet me just rewrite yours:6 n' A* O5 ^' s# U1 K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 {) L; i% V' \& V+ X" T; t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 A: H' h7 P* |% l3 k- B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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: C/ A$ ?/ W; N3 t1 O. L9 ~* i5 tThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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