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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 t& \/ H0 h8 i, h
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : K. ` x( u5 t9 `- v: C
( b1 ]0 D- ?" S" j8 U0 _; c# X& ~" WLet me just rewrite yours:
7 p2 l) ~3 n; |) {' u0 d8 iIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, s$ u8 P# p. r; G5 q0 k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! X7 M3 ^0 |8 ], S" G0 o- W2 }8 b
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; B3 Y! ?+ G/ s& z2 x5 H0 J
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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