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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- G: h" F( c, h& Reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 L1 P" D, ?0 D' K1 [
# O+ \* F$ B1 e- c1 s9 c HLet me just rewrite yours:2 ^! {7 k/ d2 H9 h; Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! N4 U% d4 n+ K2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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1 @8 I' z" U1 g7 }There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 n/ p/ v7 }) N P
$ d, p# C! D. V' F) ]/ J2 S4 n( xThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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