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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, c2 E1 T, e; s/ {- M
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % y$ ?$ z6 a8 ^4 J0 H
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 ]; c0 \2 s* }9 }" @8 L5 \5 i0 Q
6 J z7 k% T( u6 D6 x$ T/ \) G6 VLet me just rewrite yours:
; _* M" d9 z! v! hIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 j: q' a* e2 t2 @9 R
3 X5 O" A3 j. X, b* U) @9 i; {1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; ?! U+ v4 K1 N+ ?0 f* d8 ?9 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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+ ~, e' r" C2 AThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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