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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: a! n' Z% K1 `4 Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : y E' f! f. B, Y* G9 ~% C3 ]9 |$ [% z
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Let me just rewrite yours:$ v3 Z& J# {1 _
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; h, V" v! {$ G- u4 r8 W% z
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 w4 g# w: L5 t) ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. B5 H |* [, b6 H+ j+ V1 w
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 \; ~. }( \) u7 W$ B, F. N
& `4 h0 }5 v9 B! ^0 wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# U8 ]4 o% h4 o
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