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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! R5 J9 J) s6 b, Ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 X" x, M0 G( V" _5 |) p5 v; t) G; a, U( `/ R9 Z
Let me just rewrite yours:6 d4 A" p3 U& L) j0 p% x5 t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ O ^- @4 Z3 O# L0 }9 X% A
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- M/ G: x8 l/ m; q2 _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- \: S1 a6 f- S; I& \# G. [
4 K7 | S8 D. O1 z/ {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 s5 E$ G8 t- w# m
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