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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 X$ c! b4 t p7 m$ D
! G- \; s1 \$ Dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 n+ v$ Q+ C4 }# U* U& e
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 N5 K; T" ?# K0 Z! V! T) b8 h1 K
5 M* m. T) U( _" ALet me just rewrite yours:
4 H9 b% ]) c. \4 M7 H: }$ m# XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, Z) ^0 `" L, ~% }
, J& G* `, X. P# j6 G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 \# }+ l' P; M6 I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ r% ^% t/ ^/ F0 ^6 L: F- H( Y
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., ~' K9 K z2 u B! E
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