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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; @: U( c; i# ~; C8 _+ W, g1 Veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. Y: P6 M/ Z6 G4 f0 o8 u. K7 Z( H- i" Y5 G$ q
Let me just rewrite yours:' X- r( R0 w5 P8 m$ l0 X" F
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 B$ \, E; {8 J3 Q: _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." M+ {. x8 V: Q b9 B0 H
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: Z" A+ J7 m1 c O7 ~
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& J* V4 @, P6 w/ M! h9 S/ R
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