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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. E# Y8 w: ~+ g4 [8 u6 n
. O% P) |( n/ ?1 {* p9 v2 Sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 G6 }. I. l: D+ n& H6 ^everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 W3 K+ i+ l- d$ v- t% c# [/ E
/ d8 y. ^1 W& d8 m$ X1 X, d' C# NLet me just rewrite yours:$ y+ l( Z& X4 ?7 n/ n. K, t' {" c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 m4 V' j/ H* M* F% B1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 u" V, L [1 ~: S* S, K F* }2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 s1 W+ i) I+ O5 }+ tThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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2 ~# F" a+ v6 B) ` P; AThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 N/ u; j* y g$ }# a
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