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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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( [+ j) s7 q0 p7 X3 J4 nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! e0 ~9 ^6 r x8 x# X
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 H, n" C* {. |: }1 x. s
' y6 a+ U: q4 V( h& oLet me just rewrite yours:
1 _, A$ Y1 |' q3 l) u" c$ X3 CIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, a% u3 J5 P1 K9 j* q% [& L
9 S- q& {5 p1 Q4 V' [! h) G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 s7 v0 d0 T: y, `2 a0 n2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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+ p2 N& J6 ?- O: M- vThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 k! Q' G' u& _' B }Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; S$ S- X0 }. M; i) I' d
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