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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 i$ d- ]" ^9 l, D4 @it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 ~3 i$ Z" }6 r7 o T7 [ Q' L
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - ~+ H h y/ e
( g+ _# e: `7 n6 c- L' JLet me just rewrite yours:6 ^3 A2 T8 k9 I0 r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, s* N. T5 O: ^# }, Q2 M8 j( n7 b- ~
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* J( a) U4 ], c' E& z3 u3 h
! i) j8 E! ]( n8 v. q) O4 VThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. t! y, E" N7 V
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 P3 a" M! a6 J& z
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