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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& g+ H M8 b$ g0 ]1 i
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 {9 `' X* m3 d! M; G) u1 Leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % y4 J# M$ w) B/ S( k0 W) o# o
) k/ x* g2 v% O( v& @, A- PLet me just rewrite yours:4 `4 W1 q+ E0 ^+ _8 g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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/ d) n9 Y8 N# b% t8 T' e: ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& h! c5 l3 t8 U( @- R
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 J. n+ m2 G, V8 `& U: TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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8 d" ?- B4 {- U* X+ UThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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