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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ O5 u! ^7 Y v# m, @9 P$ k; m/ Z
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: G+ p% t, E) R% y: Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 I+ X6 y2 }% S! t8 C8 O
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Let me just rewrite yours:% _* `% u) n3 l1 u4 ]/ l% v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. E, l# R$ `" v" ?
, u5 I* p( K8 T" k( O* `6 O. ]! @7 s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! a1 Z! w" r; n+ I+ M) K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 S8 v4 M& d; _( e" Y) I& u
' K" e& x y% j$ g/ D7 nThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! q8 T9 e3 W0 h4 m
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