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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 [8 k( |! O3 T" k/ [) @% ^
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& O2 {/ o( @9 C. aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) U$ S6 |3 |, b7 ?: h" {2 T! `% F, C, @
Let me just rewrite yours:3 |0 G7 n3 \+ @8 a& G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. x, F* _* ?, l4 X2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 a$ A ?+ M8 {& W8 c; ^6 k, q( T- ^There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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+ A' q; ^( f. B# ^Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." z6 q" {3 p( q, }3 M, Z( m
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