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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 D# d2 A; ^7 L- O' c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + o9 ?6 r# v2 Q7 v0 O
+ r! P/ e. {$ Y% c8 ~: f0 ^# t8 MLet me just rewrite yours:( |* ?1 Y y) S+ i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 q, ~( |, b9 s% {, b0 x1 k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ ]$ V$ A; c3 ]6 m8 z' Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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$ L! s1 Q6 a/ mThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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* `/ ~7 b9 Y" i: O+ l) ~5 dThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." s# i$ ~$ s3 y& u' u" K
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