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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 u3 g) k* G, y2 S8 A& V" m2 Q+ Jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 _ w! O0 o& m0 L
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 e! J: m* U$ B, P0 {& O8 `* X7 m
) n' x: U& F* r! R, l+ N/ }Let me just rewrite yours:6 N' k$ L( v% ~/ x! Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# ?; N8 v/ ^! ?. t: Q3 o/ v
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ H. M F2 f2 k, I, G8 s5 q' V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- c: ]- C" b3 S: M6 d" }$ `, a! P
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ T: V% \% R r; T1 P: f& s* |
; ?! j9 G9 v& E, ~/ ^0 VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( ~' Y( J7 @. [3 T+ P P- r' H
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