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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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# H4 L! l) J" dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % Q! j9 E, v, H4 W6 q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 J& O, Z, d0 N. Y4 X
6 z" B/ }4 u [4 F8 D& Z$ R A0 a0 LLet me just rewrite yours:' a0 U. ^8 P7 ]) m K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 Q- M. V( q. z4 E% d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 M* x6 H* b6 @; L, AThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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3 I' ^6 _3 Y/ S$ u' `8 Z7 i3 ?Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 M, I" D7 O5 ^' P1 N: P, \
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