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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, O- O2 P0 ]7 l7 \0 Q1 l2 e. N* peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + X7 W$ H6 V# C2 T, U
; a: t- Y0 c& j$ jLet me just rewrite yours:. l% \( C1 M; i* r& X: q' H, q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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) ]0 ?0 [% Z6 I& \- p1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" f) x0 k5 B2 K2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 [/ s5 {7 G3 @
* w& l$ j- Y/ I7 G |7 TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# d1 r p+ O) X& q* R: [, oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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