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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' ?1 s$ o k7 P2 P
1 Q, M3 i$ P* [7 C0 o& C: ]8 yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( g' T% u4 R. V+ `7 k6 d& X% L, Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! o* A' V* v& f5 V3 Q( P( b0 d
# i* A( V, f9 }; O, {Let me just rewrite yours:+ \1 w# {3 Q- R" h5 r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, C8 `$ ^5 H6 M+ ?/ L, o: a/ Q+ t$ Y
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 P+ d9 J7 t1 P$ X6 S2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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* p. b ^, p3 X* ]1 T3 \2 Q& ]Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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