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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* q; ]" @$ S! G; t$ l5 J9 Eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # Q6 L9 U/ d. H+ n7 |( J# L
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 \9 e, s% `8 I, N, [# ? z
2 t/ I/ P7 A( k% a* }' i7 b) a- SLet me just rewrite yours:9 n" {' l+ ~. s. e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) @4 B8 m& ?( `
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; t+ Q: U) u; K3 e& i/ t# b7 |$ f
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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R. v0 \: V( k& H9 `Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 Y+ u# _, G+ Y
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