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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 d) a, e5 X+ g. v+ V$ r
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * Y) ?& B' I1 ]& d. q9 D
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Let me just rewrite yours:- G, d6 O) U6 a. e6 l& v! v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ T7 M& @ {0 \+ ~
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( v1 e. i( }& R* @. F' B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 m0 d5 e, Z8 I- g
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 W i$ \, L9 N, S: l" J, D
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