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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. W: }7 u8 x3 J7 O/ ^
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + p+ o1 H3 }* O, _
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 @$ R# N5 U1 T. y7 [
7 E5 D! }" l2 S- |. d+ C% sLet me just rewrite yours:* X. Y, } S8 t- z6 Y) I7 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 N$ M, A4 N. Z: S- E
' U) \" i- I1 } T/ `3 ^; k, U1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- F3 u, C* ~! d+ K2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., h# @/ _, p; [3 G( G
5 G2 a9 V- o8 O) V( m* t& p: AThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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