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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! e3 j) w& @' W1 w
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 f4 E2 q0 a( E! C6 ?1 n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 m8 H) O% J! q, T3 n4 f, c4 C A% y( k
Let me just rewrite yours:, o/ y6 @3 |, V- ~! \) _/ {$ G) P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ ^' j4 { O, C; v
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. S H; G2 b4 _0 L) Z* p; h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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+ ]+ x/ ?& M# p( ~7 }% e o+ VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. Z% L% ~3 ?. L: U9 ^" t; o) W: N
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