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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; p6 ^! j8 J! h/ V
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + n) X& X! i* |, x
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * P! [0 S( G' [8 o6 u
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Let me just rewrite yours:+ T& ^# A/ w: C8 }
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me [' j u& z" P
7 G' L" E, X; y9 ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 X5 J6 ~6 S3 u* [% Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, e o7 u3 ?6 g/ ]! v* WThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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