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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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: K* t+ j8 ?3 y0 m9 a7 J# ?+ B/ Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ p7 p3 l5 x- Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , |( h- t% {; U' q4 c% @
2 v! M. q0 B. B; l2 `# o8 uLet me just rewrite yours:
' m# m- X* H( ]- r* v, uIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 Z6 k1 Q% q: j& q( t/ i
; ]2 A$ u% t7 m* {6 u7 i! M z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 b. }; [4 I: |; }5 G) d S
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; V& {8 \. h, t! I- s8 s
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! q4 d5 P0 C' T6 T* N! i
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