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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 B" S& K2 F0 I j; X+ qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 {# V, }$ [- Z/ w2 V; K* p0 m5 ]0 reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; k a X' i) I2 x1 m4 w6 q
' B8 b1 `% y* v4 PLet me just rewrite yours:, D+ s( s6 N" ]0 c$ M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, D( c$ `+ l8 m9 i l e
. E/ ~) V- v( k- B p/ n$ P# |1 v9 [1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 d/ N, ?. G8 D. T( x2 t
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' I6 d3 N( h3 nThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 K, C! C& ]' Y5 \4 Y
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