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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% c9 O% _/ S" y: C1 Q6 Z
0 _: g! Z, C7 B( @; m" z( e8 H1 W' ?it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 Q% z. z0 c8 j1 s6 _( S% K: ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + F, x0 X C3 ~: ~2 {1 u" a4 }0 a9 E( g% y& r# n7 d' D6 I
Let me just rewrite yours: z6 k! a" [! F! R l" v# {; m9 K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ F4 U N- l$ s4 P: @; N: \% x
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' w8 M- w: b e; A; ]2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., \) C6 @+ m$ u
1 l* i/ P% }$ p& S+ ?There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 @5 j, o, U/ \/ H* {! p0 R+ Y
8 s( Q. ?4 _0 _: HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& ]8 K; o6 C b0 M& ^1 c
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