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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: d6 z! L H k+ S" d% A
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" _0 I) T! Y- `$ Q* j. y9 y8 @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 ?% m# w- E3 O0 a( d
4 J3 E( ^/ t0 cLet me just rewrite yours:
5 L0 b+ s; |3 | T1 JIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, w) O) ~ h2 k* q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! G- R0 q9 @) ?
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 X, a0 e$ k2 Q: E- ~. ^* D( f
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' U6 q3 o' r8 g6 K! Y6 g+ JThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' ~3 Y3 C3 C' O5 `
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