- 帖子
- 1691
- 精華
- 1
- 威望
- 245
- 魅力
- 0
- 讚好
- 0
- 性別
- 男
|
13#
發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
| 顯示全部帖子
Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
& {4 c+ S/ [! Q4 Z" \( J0 F* ?
9 T5 |! t8 e( bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 r; D) x: T( Y) N! E, K& meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % r6 }% M3 k3 V: K7 J: j& b7 j
1 n& ~9 H& V, u! v7 GLet me just rewrite yours:5 R' j! \0 d# E' G, K) C; ?
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 A3 i6 l6 \9 z8 L6 Q8 J' H& \
; W5 W. v$ ~9 C) v7 I' z
1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: E, @7 g, z I6 k* N/ K% k/ l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( i% f7 m+ ~( Z, H1 Q9 j
" z" p/ a" H0 M4 g0 U$ j/ H9 k
There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 `; W7 @0 Z1 \! i. y
, A% C1 j( s0 J
Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
( w2 n7 }$ M* R0 c
( t; r4 M2 c8 M; W0 `Gretz. |
|