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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 O7 a; Y5 d/ O6 W7 b' L
- V) O/ \- }1 y4 jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
L; A, s$ F0 f$ Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * o9 p$ G) l9 ~9 N
0 \* y) r! Y& s" G: ILet me just rewrite yours:1 R4 C2 t, }# j& z1 f
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( w! e/ D% U/ S$ l
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: A+ s/ B9 P. t% E2 o/ y. ^
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* h4 B. ?" n m1 E% \5 f
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 \, d0 m- d4 Z) `2 A" ?
|/ c5 X6 h+ K8 G# V" ]7 f5 |Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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