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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" q* t( j8 z/ t$ u& k
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: Q. a$ g: S3 @9 A: Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . G% k, q% g3 ~' V& |( r
$ ]5 J" ~. `2 }1 s. Q0 jLet me just rewrite yours:
$ K( E+ u, G# L, F" XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 [* A, |+ v+ W' Y1 T
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ ?2 F- e& z1 }. q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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