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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" u9 _9 ~, b# O
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 p1 R1 f9 F$ Z3 E' @( ]. t, {, neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 e$ \+ q' M" p) v B+ W
+ w3 b) ^7 k2 `Let me just rewrite yours:' k) X7 h- l+ ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 _# g8 C) H! R: |$ V9 n+ N
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 l4 {; s% {3 _9 J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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" q7 ~( H0 r, x2 Z; TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. u; M q6 @0 e2 h3 \
" I, F( l( s$ tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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