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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* `8 W7 Q$ a9 y; C) C; Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 S g8 x8 G0 W- j
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Let me just rewrite yours:, M1 c0 P8 O# A) U0 N3 H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ \ W3 ~$ V" b$ G, ]
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( W5 {1 x. E4 r2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 o; l; B, p+ Q1 p7 n
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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5 O# G( I- w- z4 {( p V3 tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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