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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# x0 n4 V% ]* L0 U
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 t* r. A+ Z/ y0 D5 a0 J/ |, ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 W8 u+ O: A& E+ H% b' O. b7 p, l% C- i. s) Z( `& B
Let me just rewrite yours:
' f( K. m: v, ?8 UIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 t) b7 c; [* t) b* n; _5 M
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! n# |0 |; E; O4 H
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& J& G. V- l+ S# j, |0 E( }
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 ?2 X8 {2 b; Y+ i: I
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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