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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: i2 e( w$ O$ H5 k* B' t
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 \! @! y& ~4 g
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 g# i& ]* c0 q! }
2 h) ~: k' D: r( H7 {. _# h mLet me just rewrite yours:
) B0 R' l5 x3 u% z' ^, Q5 dIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 D; Y t$ j. G2 l9 ]% @& A
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!% ?, v* l- f3 u; m- v7 H6 Q4 R1 t/ O
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow." ?: \7 z X, a5 O9 S
/ d E3 ]5 F, S5 O$ f" a; t) B) m9 Y { qThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# a& z+ C# x3 n
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