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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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k" {% V9 v) d) W, T2 N0 J [it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - q6 m& P1 e8 x; p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 _! ]2 ^# m X
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Let me just rewrite yours:
- t3 v7 E" B! ^1 Z) MIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* Q5 C1 G D$ b8 x9 D
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 L9 h" M2 R, g* P& W0 n
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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: d, i$ P ^ ^5 V2 wThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 Q9 ~( X; J" h8 n
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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