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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
L+ e+ R2 l/ v! @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - p5 ]* f' ?. ]% S9 N) _" P8 ]; l# D6 Q) ]+ k
Let me just rewrite yours:7 o/ Y* a$ \- u! _, [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, a* H0 Z4 ?: h% `( I: n8 M
0 Y6 v. J( F: c/ K1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. |; `9 X1 h5 K3 ~) G4 W k
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ \2 E( w0 ^- P C; \ F G
8 Y4 y# a3 O J( rThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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