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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 L, S7 U* p( {+ l% e; U
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 L, _( _8 x6 g' c& [2 u% g
* f- X% P, ^0 r* m: i" B6 G7 eLet me just rewrite yours:7 ^9 M" D1 B$ v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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! t5 J' n ]6 P: X1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 c# l9 o* J* x2 T O8 ~7 j0 X2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; [9 ~) c c1 S) v6 aThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! o: s# u' _- D2 ~) S
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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