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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# }0 G" b M X. S: j5 N* i" ~# veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; l6 H O2 q1 C; t
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Let me just rewrite yours:( \; h7 F- T6 ^
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 a; m6 p# N7 ?4 J2 Z
1 h; S. z, h! c2 u# j, F' Y( h2 u1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* `0 p) Y; f4 \" `- B9 R# B* T7 e2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 x u8 }& s4 E1 ]5 _- a% s6 Y- e* W
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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( L+ Y& E' a5 MThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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