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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 ~, n& a9 R' N) K
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everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! L: @9 ?/ k% K' M; n
$ _. [ A/ T& ~Let me just rewrite yours:) }7 s; ^# X& ]7 E, l( V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' t* j7 e q2 n# J* k2 h
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 L* {, E; l8 V7 s8 i$ k# K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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