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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: P/ H3 c9 E: F0 weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - A, }+ `* b7 H' R
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Let me just rewrite yours:( |. v; c2 \ C& f7 F5 a0 x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! [1 B. [5 L' T1 e3 r1 X
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! F, {$ D4 B I9 H0 [/ K, l, m2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 q: V% @6 E4 b" d6 E
0 l) }9 m3 G" \$ q+ dThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 u I& k$ o1 ]% F" F0 ]" x- x
3 j- ]3 s& H9 D; ?+ IThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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