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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 ^1 d) q L9 m [8 b2 l1 v
6 e; B% o5 ^" \' b7 J5 N7 `, eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, `& P0 L# N# Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! ?! _* n8 s2 |8 c
/ J" y. P _9 d7 bLet me just rewrite yours:: [2 s, U+ ?4 b) m0 s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 ~8 j7 n# C! q" ?1 r2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 m' }; l5 l6 i
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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3 ]3 `/ m# L+ A( R8 }Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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