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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ I X" C, V1 n6 a/ ?" z
; k3 k0 K3 `; Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) Z; T) r# m0 Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : i3 A+ h j- u, t
2 q ]: H' u, a% uLet me just rewrite yours:1 J" c( O( y# u" }. \" c, y1 B l1 N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. U& O G1 L- C/ g/ b! {# u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& [# J9 H# n2 J" @
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 f8 w; p2 m0 s3 r( ]7 A( N9 X% C3 ?) p- f
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