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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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$ O$ j e* y7 y, I; sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* S# z/ L1 N3 {+ Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; D& e# K5 t1 c0 X, r7 ?( `& @
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Let me just rewrite yours:/ I4 I7 A$ G( X9 o5 a4 Y! G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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|* o g9 k0 ^: R2 C& t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ c0 q2 V, I# H6 G# y, G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. V5 p3 o# l9 y+ ? ^5 p
7 k5 z" C* U( Z+ l' P0 a# pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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