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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 z' ^6 {* d( Q+ [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / A) T; G, w5 K: ?( R
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Let me just rewrite yours:8 x X4 t; h1 d- ^ u; m9 [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ z4 h, Q0 d5 B7 ~- T
5 V0 k, t% `6 \- f% R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* }2 B- _3 k) \" m% @# o' _& p2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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" P% d" ~) Q! \ {* g) N# I4 `* r% qThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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