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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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' G0 B7 q- \6 Z2 Kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! r; [' D4 A, M+ r$ s) ^
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 I, t' _/ ^3 ~- M& @7 z
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Let me just rewrite yours:$ ^* \$ G) j" m8 `2 `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 Q0 H0 {/ j/ }5 \1 j: ?7 w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% A2 \& e1 o5 H. ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. r/ `9 b8 W4 O0 w# W$ n. U
$ ]7 `- k9 N% }$ e0 jThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 `2 m1 h3 h! P i% E0 h' q
0 K& J( z" x" g3 ?4 S; L) jThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 {# H" l, D: |. t
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