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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ [/ g1 g+ t4 N4 ~+ u' A# W. R# C
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ S8 ~9 x# D& z) }8 Beveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 N4 G- j! n% w3 F& \) i
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Let me just rewrite yours:, T3 T; z# \& p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# y4 g2 y! t2 U4 h0 e1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, d% y4 c4 K" S) C+ L R2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 q# _" b, g2 U7 z. {- J. c4 J- S
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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8 N" L* M4 c0 d7 P2 YThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. Y. k# O. N7 Y V4 `, o4 m
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