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Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 08:41 PM:  R; f( p& B; x9 P+ L0 z1 d
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你頭先未話想寫文~5 e& N9 g3 L9 [$ s; G  s! q
你寫長or短?

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長啦，我驚短寫下寫下紁左長=.=

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Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 08:44 PM:
( B: v+ ]/ v7 e3 _$ e描寫人物最簡單既方法就係加對白...............

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例如呢

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咁樣貌呢

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Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 08:52 PM:' _- X* c) o  F8 `' a

& I4 I' D5 Q" w* t5 l9 d  E我地講li d 野不如過番去果邊講~~~

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Originally posted by JCer at 2005-7-22 09:31 PM:
" H& O/ D% p2 Q, h! A"烏蠅聲..."

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我拍，烏蠅都死埋9 l, M/ f0 ^+ v/ e
咩聲都冇

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Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 09:34 PM:
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好"嘈"~~

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我拍死晒啦wo~
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Originally posted by JCer at 2005-7-22 10:03 PM:
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居然真係有人去...

4 i1 a+ z# U# n6 O買分的人...

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大家好~早晨啦

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講緊咩

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hi all~