wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:6 F) W, s. C4 K9 I& Q  Y9 k2 G
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:7 d0 C$ n- k1 O% g* h) h0 }

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結局我覺得唔係咁好

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你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:
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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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我又閃.......
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[ Last edited by roykenroy on 2005-7-22 at 05:36 PM ]

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又話等我番黎既...............

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:  J" ?8 a* r  O5 W. g6 N" ?, ^
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e排唔見你既~, ]0 N- [. a4 t7 x6 a5 @
你做緊咩??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~* b2 T9 ^$ z7 R
你做緊咩??

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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^# ?9 `! V* Q3 l  Q' e
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:0 B( E: Q0 `, g# m: S
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我?
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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:. {: t' g( b5 D. s' q
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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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差唔多啦，我對呢方面好廢=.=
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