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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: x ?5 U% n% R9 R$ F! u3 {3 t
3 i7 q0 O! e1 W" ]2 F6 c: nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& ~$ n5 v! Q" L) Y! ^; ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + E3 C8 ~. e& P; f% b) V7 s( B
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Let me just rewrite yours:( w5 ~/ {; V( I V$ W
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 R- M+ B& @3 R+ Q, I0 b- y
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% `9 N* B4 ?2 s0 f( W" s1 V2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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7 u# c$ u4 p- m1 iThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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5 F) ]/ L) R5 j: n, U3 k! \# ^3 iThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." i7 Z) k$ U0 J. j
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