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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% a/ W" ?+ J! X, J9 a! `# ?) Teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( Q4 O& m% L2 L! t3 T7 f" p
3 s% b# N% U3 E- B) SLet me just rewrite yours:+ [% l3 Z4 t# ^, D% J h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me p+ e# t/ O% `6 [
" F! {" r6 U5 y X+ x1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ ^' d1 t& m0 i2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 ~' k/ o1 {5 O, y$ V8 H6 _
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ a6 l4 h* n/ _7 t0 B
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