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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& K% \& B+ r* ^4 teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & X" @8 Y* h" |" K
2 \$ ?; g" L( f% j3 e, rLet me just rewrite yours:
/ v. K- A) K; }* H% ?It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( f" m E+ X2 I% @5 E8 [. o! L9 f9 [
% q/ } C" a; i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ S& a' @$ o/ S2 J8 \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' f4 F( i5 {( A2 }0 K0 b5 O
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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