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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 t& D6 q. [1 Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 j. F* F, z, R9 P. v* s) Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ G1 L: x+ K# [3 U% M/ R
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Let me just rewrite yours:; i/ A1 G9 e; q. v; ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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V: A" {, _4 M! }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- X0 T5 k, Q0 G. { k+ u! C( f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' |. ?6 c; `$ X( rThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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