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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ L2 o: J2 J6 |
( }) ]; q: ~ |2 `it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 d0 J3 M+ i( W7 ^
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! h9 I. a; }; \
) s) x9 u8 t- i* H3 QLet me just rewrite yours:3 [) l; P% o0 V) q5 ]* a. p* u
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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! K6 p/ N3 D: I1 [, Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( A o( M% C6 h ^/ B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 a: a5 n& h1 q6 h6 Q2 z3 PThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 x9 v# @6 v- m! Y0 ?
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& o4 c: `$ ~. U8 ]" H5 [
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