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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 t9 @3 p6 [3 ?+ Z) K( V
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 r5 s+ I7 }1 `( y [- e# y. M, [
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Let me just rewrite yours:( g$ e; {: }. R( F" e& N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 ]+ @7 T, q; H* f
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! b2 i' k( {2 A2 e' _
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) x, ^) y* c( e1 ]$ W& w
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 M+ n, C& m3 H$ U% E
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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