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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* X0 Y5 J. C9 B# n$ J }
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; e6 j* N6 J* V+ Q; W2 v9 Y- a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 t1 B% j3 v/ S, o- `
# {$ ?* c9 S- h5 e, Q2 q& [- OLet me just rewrite yours:# ]5 I" E" Y6 g4 t+ N' t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 Y( y" R' x. m! U& v& w: N" G% l
8 i7 W; O: g- T2 p1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' M. s: ^. W( {2 z; I; J8 }( ]2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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$ a9 p+ B- ~1 T) ?! Q) p! i1 aThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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