- 帖子
- 1691
- 精華
- 1
- 威望
- 245
- 魅力
- 0
- 讚好
- 0
- 性別
- 男
|
81#
發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
| 只看該作者
Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 H% `& u+ ~! F1 E5 x+ k/ C5 O
, F) ?$ \# V' J, G% d2 s g
it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # f( K' m, p$ @: d; l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. F2 b2 s8 d$ l% B" h# u) _
+ \2 G, ^2 F, G9 ^5 a$ Z
Let me just rewrite yours:/ M/ a) \6 u: L, u; `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 E, i4 K& d" U5 ]
# K% C) e" |) A* y/ b: u1 t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 w" K& r6 @0 {. F0 q* ]2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
; Z8 H" T: X- e, V, {" z4 E+ K8 x8 p1 N
There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. V2 D9 d8 l, [8 H+ ^' N8 c
- b) a4 C, x: Z' E4 q# i
Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
4 g' b+ p& e0 e. j' a; \
. U" X8 I$ _' D/ Q: e0 D5 D& |* hGretz. |
|