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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 [3 N ?/ x. P5 W' Z
D. D" \- Q& V/ D9 oit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 a% L/ T, ~( }+ ]
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 o& E2 w* w- ]) I
4 `2 `) R! i/ l. i7 j9 @Let me just rewrite yours:/ @) N* g9 V5 ~- m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! K# b" T x8 G) |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 r. s6 U" W& L$ p
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* c! A0 @) @7 `; Z7 ]+ i2 n
- J2 q; m5 i& k* A7 T5 ~Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., Z. \7 x: A: f) n1 L
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