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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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4 w( A. b2 T; G4 U+ @it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; `* N, m: w/ e) b; }% z, jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & U8 E" V! y0 K; v8 z8 p N
* {. E3 } U( A, V3 d. S* NLet me just rewrite yours:1 d) V; k3 q7 b& F. A
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- J6 @/ a* a: x9 A. `: [7 E, Y
$ P% c S8 o5 l+ |0 Q1 O9 f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 Y7 c' I& n0 s" D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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' e0 j" F3 ?1 KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 _7 Q7 R2 G9 V( k" Z
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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