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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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# @. G! U) M& |& wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 {) c0 Y, `' a' u& b1 Leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . Z6 m1 ^: ^# J4 t- q
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Let me just rewrite yours:, a$ G+ w- ^7 m1 E1 m' G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 H' |: |4 k* `+ E: g
/ H+ m7 j; C8 k0 z' v1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 r5 J" j: j- N& \1 W$ @
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 F. Y) C" c: q6 v0 `5 f
3 _" ~# u7 o; a3 OThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- A; B" w% ^# ~, r# a* Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) q! l% d/ _; n* K c1 G
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