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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 F, v! D4 k7 w! y* x
, s- c7 t2 G* |it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / j# p4 Z9 Z. T7 d/ Y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 r; X; x) B# z4 |& n
1 ?" z# l* [7 {) [Let me just rewrite yours:
, L' s7 A6 v- \7 ?$ S9 UIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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: I" M5 G3 C c) I1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 Y ], k9 X6 x2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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6 M* K; `4 D" }& ?+ w( ~3 RThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 Q. s& ` @) u% ~
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 z+ |4 u/ y$ D: c
( W4 G3 i2 d, f( \/ @Gretz. |
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