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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* P2 p. M1 Y2 C s- k, l7 jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + G3 ~- g* k5 ~. n3 L w
2 p4 z% T+ n7 f$ ZLet me just rewrite yours:( O: ~5 d' M' u; Z! v3 m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" U2 k1 u& |& _8 |0 z+ A2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 J5 T; Y$ ~; _; B, }# Z& s
3 @% K. P# f* h" O' m! G$ BThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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! d0 M; d4 J3 F' \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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