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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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: a# X3 m- r" b5 x( F9 cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 D* G! ?" a+ f" q2 W: {; teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 t- O6 M, P) q1 z+ a+ q
h) q+ D5 m* PLet me just rewrite yours: I( F: M0 a- Z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- S" u/ ?$ r; e, B+ ~3 A
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ \8 a) @! S) g( E' @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." j3 L+ Y* Q0 l1 J- {
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 g, F, T i+ F8 [. [3 d3 W
/ z0 w7 W' n9 o' b3 t7 iThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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