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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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4 @) }( x1 ^) ?" |, Iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 O& g8 H' X4 ]- L" m2 W- E
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 i& n2 M7 v. ~
: ?+ v1 g; L- n" v& y1 U" dLet me just rewrite yours:
% q0 @% m/ k6 ?It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 ]2 n. C1 e9 Y+ X
) }' p- y! Y1 O: E, Q3 T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* n' I$ B% R- @1 S2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 n/ f) Q: ^) h$ `4 D1 }* D0 w5 I. H
! R+ K6 K& x$ T) c& D" ]- ?There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; a- U: o1 Z5 j3 x6 q; _
9 P, H2 m, e6 r s4 P$ PThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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