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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 f) @, U1 j/ S1 j+ Iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . x0 A# @" ?. K! x+ J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ [! z: R, Q$ U' J% o
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Let me just rewrite yours:7 d) M7 b9 j- G& l, e- d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 f. Y8 @- Q/ n# E7 y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' `" O( l% g) S2 }( ]
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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) V2 u. ? [; r$ B* n9 HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( O5 c9 e. G- i0 ?+ E) V. D
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