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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* W$ G0 W2 t3 ^8 F
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. F6 ~* S/ v2 N$ I( }% Reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. K* P) X( H9 f5 G. }- j0 P: l8 P/ d3 z' S
Let me just rewrite yours:
) u2 y! Z5 ^+ NIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* a! x" z3 ?9 w0 ?. g' l
! G" q# ~, K5 y1 K* J8 X. ~, G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: P2 ~% N8 `- N( \9 e+ n) L$ k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 l5 z' T) n. z( r; d- L
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 M% X! k9 B: Z0 Q5 {0 c& L
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& b, y1 B8 U2 R' Z& P% @
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