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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 `% c, I4 `- T8 _" J
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: q$ N8 D: S- u) Reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . v/ @/ U# P# O+ v' e e Z% \7 g' B! `9 |/ i+ }4 d
Let me just rewrite yours:) ^" z f* J* S. t; U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( u; Q/ H' U) v8 Z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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& r' L+ x% X( U# j. ZThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., ^2 H2 J. k& |+ U) D* F
+ B) F1 |: c9 B' nThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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