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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ G, `. |# i' Z. y6 N1 j5 A
+ {; |$ X( q2 X0 tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! e! l. }- h& G" d3 Q- `
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 ^9 \* o0 h0 s; g) @) k4 B
4 d1 Z! ?2 R; X7 L; @* c0 S4 T) YLet me just rewrite yours:9 g n* q" h- z& i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 O, p. o$ h! {/ B8 q! ]4 ]
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" l9 f. k. G5 \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 H1 C1 _ S) w* `2 G
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 H q- r0 d g, C, t* I
; E% I. ?* E: ?% [! [/ l; R# PThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% g. T. I+ f5 t, H1 o6 R. E- Q
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