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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; r' l, \" l; ^8 q- g7 `9 N3 u5 H, A3 L
+ J3 I% ?1 w8 N" x5 Lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. G5 \' }) R& O8 W0 Leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 D: A/ c# p" t4 t W7 l
8 C G9 b3 j) ULet me just rewrite yours:
7 D P7 l j0 B5 p( S0 u- I. ~It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 M4 F7 d8 T: v, Q
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 k# U1 s# ?9 F6 H3 M" x/ M3 @7 Z, l! _
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( C4 ?# k$ ?2 z* K* Z( v
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# \( f) `- P( |) v! g4 l
0 `+ C: n$ [+ _& S: j) xThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., N2 u' v/ {( A8 u' U6 a3 ^% B
& C9 t( d5 B5 Y: U. ?" v3 R, qGretz. |
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