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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,
7nr$p)A5J8k5aK 所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,
z/AA0L"?Pq 結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
6B*WGK.?Q 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]FYv$dxT/d.A
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唔錯唔錯~你的筆法可以出書~應該可以成為世界10大暢銷書之一

biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....,T1@c\_f1Q.h
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:
-[*v vF0D zh 好抵死....
_Z _;| vxE%I.b 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]b X;bS%A?P*u.i
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
&om)G)c%qnKQ 個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM: u a9^/m$q|

(c'c9Gw7v:yR 移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
0c'Iz"B-IJ V4L 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]Ag-l1F*Zc

pZ @2c#E6x 個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D
PjE`M7a/_ 好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(
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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素
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!! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp`%C$?9?GOQ#r.E j0A
佢講野好有point..
a1H,DDb%A8fwn 而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁
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"?;@G#M;v7iGbI"^ 甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!EU+sl$\
假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:)rE?1Y,Le0a
我比較支持篤篤xp!]1~7~$sWhL P]
佢講野好有point..... [/quote]2v0W5B] u
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甲狀腺正d:lol:
};{N Yc @C @%[?$L 支持你向呢方面發展
:F6Rq}7`#}X X M"j;y 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM::IXS'K_,cf n#?
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甲狀腺正d:lol:&Dwd0ld
支持你向呢方面發展c+_6y)d6r%G
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]Dg#N.@*])nwF

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希望你計族KEEP住呢個偉大既精神.w4E7Q-qw
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支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持
*rX^]}:N9?+a5g 我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂
P+r"C5` w*T Cg5| 我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦
C$`?\gWq8V 當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!A^4AC%J,u?P
在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:x6b5r[`s
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]D| l-sl@S H
...你果單..太小兒科... Q\$X%M0DG!jU4Gb$V
其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍....|/Bku"e0~
就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...a'A R L SD1k
好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...x+_&D\3[b
石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...s1K#a$u C&Y
由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...{:I9MK6@ _6R7q
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有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:;tS|eB

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本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM: ^6tNWmr1W D

~8P F)G?#t9[ ...你果單..太小兒科...*A @3u6CW&NL/p
其實呢你... [/quote]?G[2J5u}Z
not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?
Y0z@8q$v&|%[t this method very good wor.
s-N/I3fy'iI)o KHg and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM: L&S@9\` P ^~

[L:A0zrN not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?$tN+o5et5kF[a8bl
this method very good wor.0N-L!]9@ da5};kIt
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]
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你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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