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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 M/ r. r* x8 a$ e
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 X- K: }3 \ r7 a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / G4 l+ z4 }% Y/ c9 ]5 w
' i" K h3 A1 |1 n$ k/ vLet me just rewrite yours:1 d; @7 b- E5 c3 }* F' d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 M+ j! f1 F' ~! ?4 v; n+ ~. R
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. x* m3 V: ^) t z, i) X9 J
* V* f# J; W( H% l; N! iThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. z" w# m& d7 a
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; t1 U0 u: Z- y
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