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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& w' n5 b4 y: ]. c% O, ^
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ v1 T. }, z9 Z- x' severyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . B' d* g3 z( [! g- E, b- D$ x
0 i4 C# w8 ?% _Let me just rewrite yours:
; {4 k p& z5 z( e6 jIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) r7 q$ v* F+ `/ V. l* ^
% C5 X2 v9 q. A0 i0 J3 c1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; a& k* W3 K5 g8 \4 _8 I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* ]1 o0 b7 ~$ b+ b% j3 ^
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ p, E& [- X' c$ O8 O+ V
5 N: W( A! _; i0 g+ r4 NThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: p' A7 v( d$ ]% w( U+ K
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