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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( A( Z* _- {+ y$ x* `) y+ Z) A
5 u. R! R% o, q) ?# fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 r7 H" E5 e! X9 ?. }& Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 _- F+ N# Q; @: {3 F
& b) M3 V) A" }9 `- u+ r& |Let me just rewrite yours:
* j% a6 w1 ?- c" QIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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/ a4 W: W6 f q9 u. o! L, V1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. Q, ^# d7 { u: m# ~2 P2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ [/ d% T6 a, B
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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( d& b/ I9 r3 R* HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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