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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; `' ?7 W3 P2 r) \4 K9 B& Y3 [everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 L( e0 K! u$ M/ y6 R, r# }& P; J- F* p" |" `8 S# z
Let me just rewrite yours:5 q' \* p& }# D# p0 P# {2 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 t9 P. T7 S3 d6 h! x, f
( W9 X# d* a( W( @+ D1 n, D1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- K, T0 t( l2 r8 G/ C8 Y0 N# b( `2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, |* @. Y9 C4 a( {6 v9 V p+ YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 c# T" S. Z- _# P, ^: F
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