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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 l& W$ @/ {; Aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + `' P" Z9 B8 T! p. T' x# N
" {6 T# H9 m/ iLet me just rewrite yours:
4 _9 W! K W9 U/ r p$ zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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p# A8 k# L: J7 L. l. M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 v+ }$ w2 E8 _# O
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' @) p2 C: O# y9 A* Y GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' D1 n4 i( {; B. m
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