wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:- W; R1 z6 U0 \4 Q
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

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我果度冇咗大結局~~
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wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:- C% w" J9 q# P7 U' J# z/ a( _
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wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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原著係呢度

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你做緊咩??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:! t3 T# b6 e# ?3 |6 n; J

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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^, q% y; O5 F  t0 o2 J' E
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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:
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睇下你想描寫咩人???# _  a0 M. P1 e
好似戰魂咁??

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