wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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hi~tt
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:2 n/ u* j2 A8 o5 \2 l7 Z8 S7 t* {
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hi~tt, [& w. f, j- D( C8 O4 F

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結局我覺得唔係咁好

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wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:, F6 |  K% q. l+ L) E6 G" }# o
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thx~~
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wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:/ w$ o; b! x& E
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原著係呢度

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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~
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我?
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:
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我?
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:( r! L% _. G9 t. t) N1 p7 N5 q  a
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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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