5 [1 C- G% r. A4 a6 c+ [6 I3 J[ Last edited by yunke2008 on 2007-4-30 at 09:15 PM ]作者: vcent 時間: 2007-4-30 10:04 PM
i've been chasing the legend for then years, but I recently figured out, the lengendary Jade in Melbourne is not what it is. =這傳說中的寶物.我研究了它十年.也都追尋了它十年.但是到最後我終於發現.其實墨爾本根本就沒有翡翠的.那究竟‘墨爾本的翡翠’是什麼來的呢作者: vcent 時間: 2007-4-30 10:05 PM
hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor.../ Q- _# r' B+ p
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶. 8 ]: ?7 H# a7 Z2 h# h . ` v$ R) W. z( aLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,. % F0 v2 F' ]# J. @0 `; |let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one % @9 o& u' C5 ]- _原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶1 h6 R, ^7 }9 K: K1 g8 Z
# H, Q! u+ p9 [+ G/ h" X- gSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..' K3 q3 A0 p( h4 f4 s7 }& _
Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means? & `# z I% I# r$ W6 |, D6 e V6 d: o1 a2 ^! y- j1 ~' R; }
[ Last edited by PG-13 on 2007-5-11 at 03:30 AM ]作者: kotnine 時間: 2007-5-19 03:10 PM 標題: easy
