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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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# n/ M: k7 x5 f3 @. O8 m7 ^it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- ]3 e! v- y8 p2 X$ F' Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. R8 j, E% K, E7 n" \& d8 @
c- t- F( f/ TLet me just rewrite yours:4 i; A w. B, f: M! F
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& {- Z" X1 T- H( L2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 x6 r$ J* {+ H4 J/ x
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." F ~ ]6 h, o
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