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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 [4 e& R4 a/ d) F& }0 K/ N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , H: i7 B! ]( y: M# {7 j+ V# @& i5 o
Let me just rewrite yours:% v$ G; b d, ^4 {) f0 D* V& U5 S ?
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 A# Y5 d7 H8 d# o+ R% h
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. ^5 g3 \2 b! E; O6 a& }2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, Z$ B4 A# V$ O A0 vThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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