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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; \3 e% _& f, C
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - U- V' V# P8 G( a/ Y
8 z2 M6 B- }5 r* g. N$ gLet me just rewrite yours:
5 u& o0 Y. c: D# S1 pIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& {8 w* x- M n8 l* @+ o
6 A1 { \5 [1 J# a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 Y" ?1 l C q4 W) W
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; M& L6 y! h: o1 F
: i& ^: o2 M5 n0 vThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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