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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* ?: L9 j2 v! B( u u+ i/ o( yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. o0 z9 Z4 P, L
% k, q) U2 t! T4 [; e' V* V2 gLet me just rewrite yours:
% l0 K( e6 A$ v# H% u x) w$ FIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 R, i# v. C7 b- \8 c; J' f$ K' K/ l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 I% d9 j7 I$ C' y# l+ T5 g$ e4 [& eThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) Z) z3 P7 Z" b1 L8 I/ b# W2 V
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