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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 {) x2 e! q- M- \5 S5 M( ^& c
6 K$ l8 f$ t2 \) l+ jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 g6 O6 _/ m: w1 t/ f2 ]3 C( z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + q7 E: k0 Y. _% K: m; R
" X, @2 ~% D) t: g, {' OLet me just rewrite yours:& o. h3 n( g4 h) ^
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 k+ u1 h, J, `+ O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 j" J$ f+ ]. Z- E2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 r; P3 Z# l% b' b! Q' s
0 a2 j R% N0 D+ W0 f! N- k( v' |There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; |6 E2 m, P$ g' v& ^! A. {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 D* [0 t% L1 v: P) S
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