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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" h1 z. U) r3 {/ u2 V. [
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 f. O1 D0 m- z X$ L oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . F& | w7 l/ E' Z3 h) q
* r7 I! O3 l0 R, f( e. z |Let me just rewrite yours:7 P1 {5 I4 T( t( k7 a1 i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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+ {$ X: i/ g# H% R+ P+ C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 G: f* @& O% ~4 n# Z# v, @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' W1 i5 \7 O9 ?) z4 m( D: P
0 k& W+ C* M0 ]2 JThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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: N' N6 }1 {6 u2 A( A1 hThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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