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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 z- }) n6 [2 l9 F+ J E% z
) E( a0 d- \# a4 ~4 h! l4 ?9 Pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- C' p: ?8 D' q6 Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * G8 k0 C) G+ P9 r' u0 l4 l6 x
7 y; m2 z# p; X( y- RLet me just rewrite yours:& i4 O4 |" B5 t: s3 J4 c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ g6 o0 e$ q! X- d5 L$ g8 T( j
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 M% n6 x# W* A7 w# H, V6 I3 h
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. v B8 W. J1 |5 y2 H; q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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& ~5 y3 u# E' Y1 t T O& XThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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