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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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) G8 t& w k# z3 C0 q+ qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 F, V0 s: p% _) \1 C
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ I+ `" \- M5 J
) K/ v) K0 c8 _Let me just rewrite yours:5 L8 X4 S1 {5 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& g% X3 e% s: ^: x# ~4 T3 p
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* x/ s! s, ]0 r* E
5 T+ k- W0 O. ^* ?7 g9 C3 Z, TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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6 [0 ^% R3 O2 }9 s8 vThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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