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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! \& ]8 o+ _9 i+ y9 m. C
: D1 ]& u4 `6 p- A$ q/ Iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- Z' i; h1 I$ J: ]' \everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % }1 B, v! l9 y+ V m0 e8 E/ V7 ]4 t" f
Let me just rewrite yours:4 e, Q1 r9 c V) b: ^1 p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 V: ~7 A- B/ s' U) `3 \8 y. I% ~1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" [5 q' [9 @ S: r
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) U7 q1 J" F2 S
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 \9 |4 k# L% M- [3 i. F( h R
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