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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, B$ _" o: C, w' ~+ \- yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 U$ Z: P, M+ J' y) T* F5 w9 D' T2 ?9 O+ _
Let me just rewrite yours:$ M' A6 A) h3 x" a+ G7 `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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9 K' f" e$ ]2 \- ^5 W1 q2 r, X) ?1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 i- q- j4 Y, x% x: L) b2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., @, L$ f* h3 k, g! A9 [8 ^! c
?: x" p" @% E. I$ Z$ U* hThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& o9 V6 _0 |8 _% t" _8 f9 y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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