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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 R1 v8 w% x+ g+ `9 h' M5 K
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 _, V! ^% l, M% q D# v' A6 feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 l/ a- W6 ^2 p) w+ X
6 m8 @9 e) ^- A% ULet me just rewrite yours:5 F* A k2 s0 j1 J! n6 Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! U- p6 }6 q9 H% n
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# F" n' k, J, n- a- M/ U r
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, ?1 J; C$ S# a0 W) oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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