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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: |4 ~ g' a, Z4 o7 }& a% p
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( h4 ^4 W5 n! O7 Z( `7 b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , V, Q: f! Q* \8 [; U9 G* }3 W3 ~1 b; _) n# p1 ]
Let me just rewrite yours:
& z$ }/ b* F' UIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' A! {& {% p1 X: _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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9 @- X$ Z! F/ w$ b; Z- { XThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 c: J$ V& ?- X$ R
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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