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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 l2 u1 a1 \4 P& S
P# l# `0 x" \- g. O, [it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 u6 M" h$ Z3 T+ Z5 V y& m" heveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 H: F. s7 n; V; h' c# U
* b9 a$ R4 t) y/ V# [0 {( y) F% [Let me just rewrite yours:& T( g: E, j6 F# r9 P5 j
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ X; ^( H3 n0 v% A; d& w
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
]6 @8 o: o% t: r, Y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# t* p+ \; O: m- `( l* I8 e
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' j7 o/ i+ i# b0 s
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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