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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" P, R" A6 c' `; e \; ~% Z
% Z0 F0 {" z& m/ Hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 h8 l' S* X+ Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 ]: {0 n* D Y* o3 \
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Let me just rewrite yours:% O, T- Z9 G1 V0 i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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^. g, y( {2 Y3 M `( L& p R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& V# {, H h# n! q& S- I3 a+ F( n2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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K$ j( q! d z$ \- H G2 eThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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0 Q8 L \$ \# z9 s( eThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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