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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ Q& N$ y! F! c+ f; q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: u7 ~1 V( A$ Z `& ]! j9 k( qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; X% _$ y- K, H! h! B/ u" f" u2 E1 ^
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Let me just rewrite yours:# y+ L4 v# t- S8 v4 m% q+ q' S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 a# Q0 N- J3 y$ o- R! H1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 R- `, U6 ]! o; B: X
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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2 A; Q l) |% x WThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 I3 n0 u* }0 [0 F! b- e3 m
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* I+ x0 N8 g7 R, D1 o
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