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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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9 H4 o$ a a0 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / C* }7 O- r. f6 f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / F( G& p. \: Q ~! l
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Let me just rewrite yours: K3 U4 J0 l) B
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 b9 i4 y2 u; u- u- O- x: g1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 ]2 `) w: A6 b. z J
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 g; f6 D4 e$ c6 l3 K& `0 x( X
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