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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) |# I! [+ I+ C+ R% S
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; ~0 Z& ]; p. B, R8 `: f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 ?+ w8 _1 f) q' C6 f
, {/ C+ Z, `1 O7 BLet me just rewrite yours:- A+ c( S2 m; O+ i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ \4 s$ |# a1 J0 J; I: m w) E
2 T. r3 S7 T" _$ v1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ u* D3 u! q; ?% X
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( \& o' m- X% [2 R( U" j5 C8 I
9 ^% D1 V9 V/ b+ A7 `( Y' t; aThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: A8 }" T# E7 K# s& Q
* @& z' d3 G8 [" X5 U o% UThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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