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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% I! H2 J! |6 F6 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 w8 j; M0 J \+ A: g- @$ u+ H" _
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 |3 S3 F5 A) x' ~* j- N9 N
6 a, k- u1 Y( _ A3 NLet me just rewrite yours:
& p4 g, {# g/ C' hIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 |# @2 Q! C" q) \
1 g4 Y. w5 z3 }: Z: }8 \1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 ?$ w" s! m7 S7 V& i2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ Y! n2 b6 c: i
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; J" o" t8 s4 d3 G% u9 `9 ?' W
, B* C/ v: G; Z; Q0 J' XThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 v- m, _" u+ Z- x* T+ v
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