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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& f( ?1 {- X. v1 t) D2 h8 D8 I
1 \; M5 ~* l( |it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 U# x+ @( z9 j& U
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 F0 I4 c5 \$ F
5 e$ Q6 j) d! V- {, L: {( \ z/ BLet me just rewrite yours:0 l! ?2 [2 \% P$ l; }/ X7 U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& E; j+ _% ^0 q6 [& C6 ~' m
& E3 f, \6 A f0 K) _; W1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ i" E/ { z/ x" q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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& {& w' V: e: WThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' T" m7 D+ Z4 O/ Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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