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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% k/ t) m- X' M, Q% k, n; git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" X9 i0 [- S+ H4 }8 @, @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 M& H, X" N: C) j, |
! ]- K# V" S4 a5 Q3 o: P: c6 {Let me just rewrite yours:% ?3 z, w& B, Q( J8 `& z8 @) L- Y' R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& x3 v- A, ?( J, h
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# @+ M* l! B+ [: a$ o! N" ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( c- `4 p6 j- U& NThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! y, {8 `* J! e, i+ @1 L! e
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 l6 I$ q% a, f3 O& g& S
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