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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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) a7 Q/ K4 C% y5 Q7 b, qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / H" g; r; Y; w+ G: I" d2 |: F
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 T! W" i4 g; ~: u0 G
5 h2 d" V4 K& V e" r y# OLet me just rewrite yours:
9 @5 H0 q5 ?* x, hIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ @/ g) P3 {5 I
$ L, u9 M* g, i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ R; O, X) C* v6 ^" p. e1 G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ Z6 C$ }( G1 o& B, N* E2 Q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow." I4 s% S w+ x: _2 x
) c. m) n3 Q! G5 C, D8 z2 Y% ~- tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 P' t4 b0 M) Z6 S" L) C8 i% m
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