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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: M" t5 w; K) ]: i- `/ `/ c1 l
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
S( b+ [' `( H8 A4 p4 U% Ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 Z/ v; g0 [& p$ L1 W
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Let me just rewrite yours:
/ i# z) q6 @4 Z, L. R6 {- aIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 ?0 y+ d: C; U& H! R
! J0 o6 Y3 B- B! W0 G/ k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 i3 L, q& O+ u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ Y5 K: D( O. x' S: N5 ]Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* Z+ s7 o& Z i2 F9 g% S1 d
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