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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; ]) O& E( `7 G: j" T) B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 N7 [ I- x7 o( [* \
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Let me just rewrite yours:, `9 ~, s1 a4 |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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) K2 i+ y9 n, A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& [! q0 M- y. V, x6 G- d
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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" V/ G7 f( C) [Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 }- ^7 i& r" ^+ R2 n6 p! h
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