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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 n4 r8 @. G- Lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / P5 d8 V* h( e
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % S; w2 G( r0 {6 N( @! r8 F
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Let me just rewrite yours:) t+ }4 ?% z5 e" s" q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ ^' _' g& }9 I; H. M. v
/ v. x' L; J- L$ H2 ~0 a$ d' w4 p& U1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 f/ ?: }8 s0 ~! {6 x8 k& n
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 P* J: F6 v- S& S, q4 K# P
9 P: |& [; C: u# n3 HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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& q. e6 |, O) u0 j6 d) {$ VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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