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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 h0 E8 \; E+ t5 a: p1 w
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: p$ {. q5 a/ q) |' ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ E3 s! T$ K" Q8 L7 r- |8 y" H8 a3 U T" ^
Let me just rewrite yours:
) r4 ^6 M/ [) {! g; WIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 @! m1 R. R+ y+ g" f/ s- [; y4 I1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ z& i/ _$ q5 x6 u5 s5 r2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 d* t( l. {# G: r, w2 p
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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