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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 f; h4 b' Z: U; S6 }
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( Q' p1 l; h" c; {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , U/ H" W3 H: `9 ~
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Let me just rewrite yours:- F) |" r5 @3 c. J7 s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# d ?2 L: m0 B) U' q
, G, X. o# F2 ?4 C; R4 K9 J4 s; k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" |% ~. m3 ]3 d
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& \' ^* @1 b* R! @
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ L4 [* ^5 W+ U$ @
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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