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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
) o8 l7 T& ^9 E3 ?一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.! J( O( _7 c! m" T8 h
3 D. }# K7 w4 g2 K. n, TLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.% a3 j" M, X; [$ e' H) {: M
let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
/ e7 {! b5 X6 x/ b! _: i( n+ H9 u原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶3 J9 `) h* j( W5 w' S
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
( ^( q( v' ?( SAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?$ w, b& G- G3 R. y
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