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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ {6 |1 J, T, y" Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. @- s& T9 U0 a( F! l
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Let me just rewrite yours:6 M9 R* `; {# i- v1 i$ C
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" F. |' _; j/ E' A* U2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ A7 h5 [/ ~6 J. [
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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