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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...5 f* P* u, A% F" A/ P
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.% y3 g1 s! b2 Z9 }+ P8 m" v
4 W! g- f0 u1 ?: z; z& b$ k+ HLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
3 u1 n& U% o# }" G* P2 c' s# zlet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one4 T: {, T' Q3 z/ B
原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
( q7 F3 y+ @9 |: \9 b: CAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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