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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...9 X) p; E' q& y j5 r8 F
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.) } f4 s) q# @9 }
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
6 l5 Y, y( U6 rlet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one2 k8 ~. O4 F! b" U0 N
原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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5 ^& \- P" E; E( _/ f7 cSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..# g2 ?( X! j% j) L; ~
Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?) d9 s3 N2 A7 ?! F2 s/ Q- S
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