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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
, S" E+ f# p8 I一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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0 b! I! e, }+ j" ~- I/ jLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
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原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
# x! X- r! A9 E# b9 _2 _Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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