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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
) ^+ P9 |- X! N5 z4 g一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.$ y5 O2 E4 t5 B; _7 E" ?% x: E. |
3 N! {: u$ l. b pLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
' z2 f/ D* A& r& t$ z- ]. v, |# X# |* Blet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
0 F0 T7 ~) V4 g: n, A) y原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶6 r0 ?# \8 v$ a. i) [5 `0 E
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..+ j% x& D( y- c3 T$ f
Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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