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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...( t8 L" R, j: }/ ?3 a8 G
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.& ]$ k4 @$ x6 T- s: x$ k5 V& \# ]
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
" s8 R2 f$ g8 A) ]let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
8 N& r. y7 i! D9 s% T/ G原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶0 R1 W) {2 c7 q2 y
3 t8 O" j" R2 e) w! R' HSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
5 G K4 H, ?- j: G3 F% i1 ?Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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