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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...% z( r+ n& w( \
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.5 y; C' y% I8 C5 |9 s# h
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.* N) a; }0 M# H& I% y2 [: ]
let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
' u! K# o; _7 T5 t0 R- u原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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( o" d W# o2 y! e/ |Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
: n6 i5 [8 T4 G- PAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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