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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
6 R3 Y) D6 y8 v5 `/ b0 i一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
% q) K3 ~" N0 u; n" j( E6 z7 klet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
, { t) M7 x& t. ^/ o$ a( e: B/ j: }* ^原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
2 D2 L4 o3 L- {5 U l Q7 P9 e( pAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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