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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...& V/ g, x; p* Z$ a+ D6 o6 R, O
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶." s2 q$ f+ F! K6 P d6 a7 a
+ _. g% M1 D, g5 E' Y1 s4 qLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
) f! A) p. v% d! R4 ]let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one, o9 s, i/ W- r2 a! |! p! Y( P
原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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4 X! ` `! a7 O w; KSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
% w9 H. E$ a# ZAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?% B4 o% I- ?2 B4 R( f/ j3 m. I1 d
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