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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
# S. \# U+ U/ I( I9 h2 a一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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9 [9 }0 I1 K6 t ~- _+ P; WLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,. u- ]% j& g( @9 Z9 x2 j3 G
let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
$ Y5 t3 Q$ c8 C. @$ ~3 Y* m原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶2 V6 I; N: E. H; N$ D. V9 v$ p
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence../ @9 y: M# T5 z; D
Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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